I thought for a moment but my thoughts left me,
How do I describe you, dear rain and your beautiful mysteries,
You drench my soul and still I’m dry,
May be the thirst would never die,
You pour in your blessing and still we seek,
a little more of your beautiful bounties..
You drop in a river and make it shine,
The sun takes a break and gets a bit mild,
The flowers fill their cups of morning tea, sipping each drop so delightfully,
A bird sings on my window sill,
The trees dance by joining in ,
and what do I say about the little leaves, They gather your drops and play with glee,
and I seeking company join the gang, and sing to the lovely nature’s song.
Oh rain do visit us every year,
we wait for you in an anticipated fear,
and when you drop by generously.......My heart tunes in to your mysteries! :)
27 comments:
Why wait in anticipated fear for the rain- something that we look to with glee?
Besides I like your verse. They pick the beauty out there.
Nice poem Sana. I loved it. I am reminded of this beautiful quotation: “Anyone who says sunshine brings happiness has never danced in the rain”. I like walking in the rain.
Beautiful verse
Even a blade of grass wouldn't raise up from the earth if it were not for the rain. Only rain can heal the wounds it had inflicted by not visiting the land when it should.
Rains bring such a romantic feeling:)
a beauty of nature... i can feel the warmth of mud wafting up, i can smell the sweetness of aroma that spreads around... a lively verse at this departing hour of monsoon... and sorry sana, i couldn't follow you all these days... may happiness rain on u always.... tk care.. :)
beautiful poem and well written.
but look what is happening its raining tooooo much now .. pakistan is flooded and punjab soon will ...
But rain does have its charm and I love to dance in the ran .. paper boats and all the stuff splashing in puddles :)
beautiful poem...described the setting really well...just one thought though....the first few lines felt as though you were trying hard to make them rhyme, instead of fully expressing yourself. that somewhat reduces the impact...nevertheless, a great work!
that brought a smile to my face. thank u.
I also like walking in the rain, only if it is not a thunder storm with lighting. Very nice poem and I also like the smell rain brings. Have a nice evening.
Rain seems to bring the poet in us to the fore. Good one!
Thanks Anil :)
Hey Thats a beautiful quote SG, Thanksd for sharing!:)
Indeed Gp..Indeed :)
It Sure does Samvedna :)
Dont have to be sorry Jayant..Im happy u visited :)
Yes Bikram, the negative affects sure ruin the fun, but we we just think about the rain..it gives a real good feeling!
Thanks for the comment Musthafa, will sure work on it :)
Im glad Ajai :)!
Hmmm the smell of wet earth..youre right Margaret..thats the best part :))
It sure does RGB ;)
You know, you have beautifully expressed my thoughts one rainy afternoon recently. Exactly how I felt. Beautiful expression, Sana, with contradictions for spice.. but that is what nature is and too is life. :-)
:) Thanks for the lovely comment Ellen :)
Very nicely expressed :) Makes me feel like dancing in the rain..really!
This is a lovely photo and poem. Thanks for stopping by. I have enjoyed my visit here.
An English Girl Rambles
Hello Sana:)
I never realized that someone can write such meaningful and interesting poetry about rain. Yes, I agree with you completely what you have so beautifully portrayed.This was what I felt when I was working in Madhya Pradesh.
Now Kerala is going through a spell of rainy season.
As a result of heavy rain Kerala remains a vast garden all through the year.You will find greenery all the year round.There is a joke about this. One central minister came to asses the drought situation in Kerala many years back.He surveyed Kerala from a helicopter.He found Kerala green every where.So he reported there is no drought in Kerala.As a result Kerala was denied central aid on account of drought.
Yes, we need rain for food crops to grow,agriculture to flourish,plants to grow, flowers to bloom,hydro electric power to be generated,for drinking water and for little children to have fun and so on.Hence your poem paying wonderful tributes makes complete sense.
I enjoyed reading your lovely poem which opened the flood gates of my thoughts.
Best wishes Sana:)
Joseph
:) then what are you waiting for lostworld...dance wheneva u get a chance:)
Hi Denise, good to see you here!!!Thanks for visiting!:)
Mr. Joseph, Id love to visit Kerela one day...its a paradise of greenery for sure :)
Thanks for such a nice comment!
Soooooooo touching and well written
:))
(Thanks for your concern
it means alot to me
to have so many real friends :))
THANKS Sana !!
Nice writing, Sana :)
Im always there Anya, hope your husband gets well soon :)
Thanks Ayesha!:)
Rain washes out :-)
Well written!
Thanks Kiran!
Rains are really awesome and u have taken the romance to us.
Awesome piece..
Lovely..
Sana,
This one touched my heart. Beautiful poem with excellent picture to match with the words :) Could not be better.
Thanks Nipun and A :)
That was good.You have a way with simple words.
very nice poem
:)
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