Sunday, August 9, 2009

mY wORLD!


Oh! My Country, I am overjoyed!
Overjoyed at the fact that you are my home,
You are my world for me, for sure,
You are like the fresh drops of dew,
I opened my eyes in your arms,
you are where I want to breathe my last,
I moved on you as a toddler and then embraced the unknown path ahead,
There were moments when some made me feel you're not mine,
The moments passed but I held on to you,
Oh! My country, this is just a bit of my love for you!
I will strive to make you shine one day,
We'll share together, whatever comes our way,
I'll always hold on to you, as you've always held on to me,
You are an essential part of my being...
and on this Independence Day when we'd celebrate our freedom together,
Love would resound through the beautiful words of joy,
Saare Jahan Se Accha, Hindustan Hamara:)

20 comments:

manivannan said...

I'm touched by your patriotism sana :-) Your poem shows how much love you've for our country! Great!!!

Saare Jahan Se Accha, Hindustan Hamara :-)

Margaret Cloud said...

It is always nice to see and hear about someones love for their country. Very nice poem, have a great week, thank you for coming by.

Kiran ((( WavesTakeMe ))) said...

Happy Independence Day Wishes; but I wish if the love transcends the nations..

A New Beginning said...

Thanks Mani!
Thanks Margaret,same to you:)
:)thanks Kiran!It surely will!

Mustaf said...

Hi:-)

It is really touching, the country badly needs people like you today. I was specially touched by
you are where I want to breathe my last

Happy Independence Day and All the best :-)

AJai said...

Nice to read that before Independence day. Brought all the desh prem from inside my heart. Thank you very much. :)

A New Beginning said...

Thanks Mustaf, that indeed is my wish:)
Hey Ajai, I am glad I could do that:)

Amritbir Kaur said...

A nice tribute to the country in the wake of the Independence Day!

issam said...

Wonderful!!!
It's nice to hold on to our love...:)
specially to our motherland...

Joseph Pulikotil said...

Hi Sana:)

Lovely, inspiring patriotic poem.

I wish the politicians, the black marketeers, the smugglers, the corrupt and the criminals of this country read this poem and understand the true meaning of patriotism.

To see a national flag on the window of a poor man's house reflects not only his patriotism but the enormous amount work that is yet to be done in removing poverty, hunger, homelessness, unemployment, misery and suffering in our great nation.

This poem is a great inspiration to me.

HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY,SANA:)
Joseph

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

I am really touched with this poem yaar..

Happy Independence day to everyone here and around ..

CHeers

A New Beginning said...

A very happy Independence day to all!!

angel in disguise.... said...

exactly..saare jahaan se acha...hindustan hamamra!
JAI HIND!

-=A.R.N.=- said...

Belated Happy Independence day wishes!!

(Ironically, yours is the first blog I've seen so far with a post on I-day.

A New Beginning said...

Hey Angel, indeed:)
Hi A.R.N., I am glad to be the first one in that case:)

Mohammed Musthafa said...

I agree with A.R.N. Yours really was the first post I read with a theme on Independence day. Weird...Btw, keep it up!

Rush said...

i missed out on this blog for Independence day...will follow u on this blog too.
Why 2 blogs Sana?

A New Beginning said...

Thanks Musthafa:)
Hey Rush...this is the original one..the one I started from...the other was made was nana, coz he wanted to share certain things...he left but 'yadeein' will stay forever:)I jus hope I can do justice to it...its more on memories and this one...just random thoughts:) My musings:)

A New Beginning said...

Thanks Musthafa:)
Hey Rush...this is the original one..the one I started from...the other was made was nana, coz he wanted to share certain things...he left but 'yadeein' will stay forever:)I jus hope I can do justice to it...its more on memories and this one...just random thoughts:) My musings:)

workhard said...

That is so nice....

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