Its a beautiful morning, white, with a tinge of golden yellow. Mr. sun seemed to be in a good mood. So I just asked him,"hey! Mr. Sun what's up?How come you're not your usual fiery self today?", "Well my child", came the prompt reply........and its from here that my poem takes a flight..........."Though I wasn't in a mood to mingle with the clouds,
but I thought, may be its hard to carve out,
a niche, without blending with a few,
happiness, gaiety , love and you,
so I decided why not give it a shot ....
lets blend with the clouds and let the weather rock ;)
Thank you Mr. Sun was all I could say,
the results of seclution, end up in dismay,
its when we tend to blend with the colours of the world,
its then that we carve a heaven on earth :)
11 comments:
Hi Sana,
That's a really nice concept depicting cooperation and adjustment.
Sana, you have a unique way of conveying strong messages in a beautiful manner.
Thanks, and have a nice day:)
Wow.So imaginative and sweet
Nice. :)
Very sweet poem which conveys a good message!!
Thanks Ayesha, Mr. K.P., Ajai and whirlwind for your warm comments :)
Hi:)
Greetings:)
An excellent poem with a powerful message.
It is true that when the sun mingles with the clouds, it is soothing and attractive. Left alone it becomes deadly, scorches the earth and many people suffer from sun stroke.
So also, when people mingle with others, they are cool, calm,friendly,cheerful, happy,kind and spread joy around. Introverts and people who avoid company never learn, moody,likely to explode, harbor dangerous thoughts and may cause harm to others.
Thanks for sharing a wonderful philosophy of life.
Have a nice day:)
Joseph
Hello! Are you blessed to write such beautiful poems? Very nice!
I totally agree with you Joseph, "when people mingle with others, they are cool, calm,friendly,cheerful, happy,kind and spread joy around".
Thank u mind writer for your warm comment:)We all are gifted in our own special way..therefore the same goes for u 2:)Keep up!
Hello there ! We got back since Sunday but wasn't able to visit blogs till now. They got sick (diarrhea) except me. We actually brought our son to the hospital today because he is fevered (still is till now.).
I would like to thank you all for the wonderful and encouraging words you said and left at my blogs. For the sympathy and prayers, and for those who shared their blessings to the family! May God bless you all for your compassionate hearts!
Wow!!
very beautiful lines...
Thanks Rose and Sarah!
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